Qualities that make web content good and how to improve yours!
Monday, May 23, 2011 at 5:30PM YOUR WEBSITE'S FATAL FLAW and why you need an honest appraisal
Remember that “stuck-up” kid in school? You know, the one who thought she had the real “wow!” factor going on and considered herself to be the coolest thing in the universe (and therefore beloved (and envied by all).
There was just one little problem. Nobody really loved her and few wanted to be friends with her. It’s hard to love a snob, isn’t it?
Well, this is just the sort of problem many websites have. Too often they’re bloated monuments to the self-importance of their owners and creators. It’s as if they’re shouting “Hey, look at me, aren’t I cool? Aren’t I smart? Aren’t I clever and cute?”
To which most website visitors respond: “Um, no, you’re actually pretty lame. See you later.” And who can blame them? You’re saying you’re great when...you’re so obviously not.
WHATEVER YOU DO, DON'T DO THIS
It’s frequently obvious in the copy, the lifeblood of every website. Funny thing is, so much web writing is so very bad. Take, for example, this little gem pinched from a florist’s website describing a flower on offer: “Pinkly pulchritudinous and amazingly delightful, infinitely charming and sensationally fascinating. Ugh. Would that entice you to purchase that flower, or, more likely, induce a fit of eye rolling exasperation?
Words matter. If your web copy is oozing adjectives, clogged with shop talk (words and terms understood only by business/industry insiders) or heavily seasoned with $10 dollar words (that’s you lawyers!) that would require readers to consult a dictionary, then you’ve definitely crossed the line.
Even worse is to clumsily tout yourself, especially if you’re in a crowded and competitive e-marketplace. Consider this all too common variation of website self-appreciation: “Why choose us when you have a million choices? The answer is simple. Because we are the best! Best in quality, best in service...” etc.
Yeah, right! If that doesn’t sound like that stuck-up kid from school (“I’m the best!”) then nothing does! Websites that do this are essentially saying “We’re great because we say so!” (Can’t you just hear Dr. Phil asking, “How’s that line workin’ for ya?”)
Have you committed these website sins (among others)? Chances are you probably have and don’t even realize it. Don’t worry, though, the good news is that you can repent and change your ways!
It all begins with an honest appraisal, or audit, of your content. This can be personally and professionally painful, especially if you are the content creator, as is the case with many small businesses.
WHO IS THIS ABOUT ANYWAY?
The most important lesson in this process is: It’s not about you! It’s about your audience. Too many companies of all sizes inundate website customers with information about themselves and how wonderful they are. Who cares!
Every word and image must be geared toward meeting THEIR needs, not yours, and helping take an action or make a decision. Therefore, content rule number one is to know who your audience is, what interests them and how to meet their specific desires. Fail to heed this overriding rule and you might as well forgo a web strategy.
If, however, you do observe this rule, then a careful analysis of your existing or planned content is in order. The following will be helpful in guiding you through a content appraisal.
are you saying what you think you're saying?
Are the graphics, words, video and audio elements on your web pages conveying the information, the feel and the ability to take action that your audience desires? Carefully look at your content to make sure it is saying precisely what you intend it to. Better yet, have someone else (who didn’t create the content) take a look at it. Being removed from the creation process, they’re much more likely to be able to determine if your message is hitting the mark.
- are you saying what you think you're saying?
Are the graphics, words, video and audio elements on your web pages conveying the information, the feel and the ability to take action that your audience desires? Carefully look at your content to make sure it is saying precisely what you intend it to. Better yet, have someone else (who didn’t create the content) take a look at it. Being removed from the creation process, they’re much more likely to be able to determine if your message is hitting the mark. - up-to-date and accurate
Seriously, you’ve got to keep things fresh. Info that is weeks, months or even years old is inexcusable if you expect to get anything out of your web marketing strategy (i.e. more business!). Are your links dead ends? Are your logos, copyrights and trademarks current? How about your stats? Inaccurate and old information undermines your credibility. - getting things done
This is about your website visitor’s ability to get done what he or she wants to accomplish. Do you make it easy to do so? If you’re selling, is it easy to buy from you? If you’re receiving donations, do you make it easy and secure for people to give? If you’re offering information to help people make decisions, is that information accurate, concise and well presented? Again, is it actionable information or stale and useless? Remember, you must be ruthless when auditing your information! - go ahead and get help—IT'S WORTH IT!
Finally, unless you are an adept copywriter or trained graphic artist and web designer, it’s best to farm out your web content to professionals. You’d be surprised how many small to medium business websites rely on unskilled, in-house content creators with results that range from the merely embarrassing to the legally suspect. Here again, however, be discriminating and don’t allow your writers and designers to make another cardinal error — that of making your website a showcase of them and their wonderful talents rather than your bottom line!
Remember, your credibility comes from helping your customers accomplish what they want when they visit your website. It doesn’t come from saying how great you are! Leave that to the stuck-up kids at school.
written by Scott Wigton
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